Written by Shara, Dhaal AEC & Contributed by Eleena, English Teacher, Dhaal AEC. Thanks a bunch for your contribution.
Your family recently celebrated a special occasion. You helped to organize the celebration. Write an email to a friend about it.
In your email you should say
say what your family was celebrating
explain how you helped to organize the celebration
describe what happened at the celebration
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Some quick fixes we suggest:
- Avoid copying chunks from the question: instead of writing “family celebration” it would have been better to specify the event in the introduction.
- Avoid run-on sentences and use short forms: [ I ] thought I’d drop a line
- Be careful with prepositions: meet her [after] a million years.
- Avoid passive structures: tasks were divided among the members
- Use the correct pronoun: …games we played. THEY were fantastic.
- Use more informal register: Send my regards to your mom > say hi to your mom