Aussie friend – A* Model Email

Aussie friend - A* Model Email
  A pen friend of yours is coming to stay with you for a week. Write an email to welcome your friend. In your email you must; describe where he/she will stay explain what you are going to do together tell who is looking forward to meeting him/her and why The pictures above may give… ...

Wallow in something dreamy: A* Email

Wallow in something dreamy: A* Email
Your pen friend has asked you to describe your favourite hobby when you write next. Write an email to your pen-friend describing the hobby. In your email you must; describe the hobby explain why it is your favourite hobby ask your pen-friend to send some something you want The pictures above may give you some… ...

Survival Challenge – Student’s Response

Survival Challenge - Student's Response
You just took part in a reality show called “The Survival Challenge”. Write an email to a friend giving the exciting news. In your email, you must: Say how you got the opportunity Describe what was the hardest part of the competition Explain who won and how you felt about the whole experience Student’s Response Dear Cloud, ...

Teeny-weeny, but priceless

Teeny-weeny, but priceless
This is an authentic student’s response for a letter writing question about losing something small, but valuable. Despite occasional clumsy language and a few register errors, overall, this is a strong piece of writing which fits to the higher mark bands. In order to further improve the letter, she could have explained how the purse ...

An interesting discovery: A* Email

An interesting discovery: A* Email
You recently went on a picnic to a nearby island where you saw something interesting. Write an email to friend telling what happened.  In your letter you must; tell when and where you went describe what you saw describe your feelings about what you saw The pictures above may give you some ideas, and you… ...